my observations on it and taking what I have heard on my own sculpt from other. Over all it is getting there. I feel like mine some of the symmetry is not quite there, but biggest thing I see is the lack of the S curve one should see running from the nose to top of the head. your forehead is a bit too flat and could use a bit more definition that will bring that S feel to the area. my only other thing is I would soften the cheek/chin a bit more. I see a hard edge on the bottom there and just softening up that edge will make it feel more natural.
When you say Primer I am curious. why primer on clay? If you are using a sulfur free clay you will not need a barrier between it and the molding material if Silicon.
When you say Primer I am curious. why primer on clay? If you are using a sulfur free clay you will not need a barrier between it and the molding material if Silicon.
Raven Ocelot